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The Nemesis

by Christopher Valin

A villian that wears black leather, you got my vote.
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First of all, a villian that wears black leather will have all the girls wanting him. I mean who doesn't want a hot super villian dressed that way. Alex has character flaws but you want to forgive him and give him a second or third chance just cause he is so bad. I love the banter that goes on between all the characters, it makes them feel real. The scarcasm, the cut downs are not in your face. It is witty and there is a realism to it. The line about dinner with the parents on Sunday, so funny; you just don't imagine a villian trying to win parents over. I think it is a unique concept that makes the villian almost loveable, kinda like Gru in Dispicable Me. You find yourself cheering for a bad boy. Sometimes we are sick of following the rules that we want to be bad. I loved it when Gru takes up all the parking when he bumps the cars out of the way. The same with Alex, you want him to have the hot "super hero material" girlfriend, or at least for a little while. I mean hello, there is a line here, ya know, and I want a crack at it. I do have my leather cleaning spray in my purse.:)

I can't wait to put on my steam punk goggles and get my bowl of popcorn ready for the show.

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