Hi there, thanks for the review for Ticking Jury, it's still a first draft and all of your points have merit and I intend to address them in the next draft...need to smooth out the character gear changes so twists are believable! I will try and get to read Propellor, just have a deadline for a musical I'm writing, but maybe next week I'll have a read. Thanks.
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