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Engaged To Life: Episode 1

by Sunday OFS

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After his recent engagement to Carlen, Daniel invites her to move in with him. Although Daniel fails to mention to her that he lives with three other roommates. As the five live together in one household they stubble through relationship problems and life.

Type: feature

Genre: Drama,Romance,Comedy

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Characters:

  • Daniel Moretti (Danny/ Dan)
  • Carlen Davis (Car)
  • Anelle Fouller (Anne)
  • Russell Gray (Russ)
  • Cassie Fouller (Cass)

 

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    • sid.rothchild

    • 2012-08-21 04:08:22
    • The dialog rings true, so that's a good first step. I'd agree with others who have posted that the format is not correct. It seems like a something silly to pick on, but it changes how you think. I'm not exactly perfect in that sense either, but it helps to keep reading other scripts that are formatted correctly. Just google a few scripts of something that is in a similar genre as what you're trying to write.

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