Engaged to Life: Episode 4

Has potential

by Angelique

Character

Dialogue

Concept

Writing Style

It seems like this could make a great rom com if you included a bit of humour.  You need to get someone to proof read for you but all in all not bad.

Conversations

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  • Angelique

  • 2012-08-08 14:20:57
  • No problem :-) It looks like your writing a TV series is that right? It's a good start, i'd suggest downloading Celtx, it's free and it will help you out a lot with your formatting. When you get a chance have a read of 'Cell Block' could do with a young persons point of view x
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  • Sunday OFS

  • 2012-08-08 14:16:29
  • Your review seems fair. Thanks.