Sheep

I love stories like this; psychological ones.  I think this story can be developed even more and made really exciting.  I liked th ... Read More

Loved the idea! You have a brilliant imagination! And the writing is crisp too! Keep it up!

Cool idea, nicely written.

However, it's a little confusing as to who the main character of your story is.  We ... Read More

i loved this!the concept was original and had me hooked from start to finish.