Hi Adam, It's a great story so far, got to say hope Marie gets her man at the end and that Finley idolizes her. I also hope Mr Finley's character is b ... Read More
Good feel good story, good charcter representation told.
I couldnt understand some of the local lanaguage with not living here for a long time, which ... Read More
Can I assume this is the begginning of something longer? I think it must be, especially as it flips from being about Finley to being about Marie at th ... Read More
I loved the concept, young adults still living with parents is a strong contemporary theme. There were places where I found it too wordy - less would ... Read More