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  • oryx25

  • 2012-03-04 13:19:30
  • I really enjoyed the idea and you successfully created a very different culture but it was hard going and by the end I did feel as if I'd swallowed a text book! If you do get around to fleshing it out then Scapa and Jalai are very promising central characters and their differing world views make an excellent basis for an intriguing story. Good luck!