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The Moon Door

by aero68

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A short story set in China.

Type: Short Story

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Two people come together after a long absence and find somethings never change.

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    • aero68

    • 2012-01-06 11:30:13
    • Thanks for your comments and suggestions. This story will be rewritten very soon. I was uncertain about the use of quotes, which I felt would be wrong as he isn't actually talking, just thinking. Therefore i agree italics might be a good alternative. Aside from the grammatical errors did you enjoy the story?
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    • paulwoods

    • 2011-12-20 15:26:50
    • Nice character development and very descriptive story

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