This was a sharply written piece and a step inside the mind of someone nobody wants to be... the parent of a psychopath. The story flowed well and was a quick read without the obstruction of any unnecessary "big" words. I would have liked to have seen actual snippets from THE suicide note. It would add a bit more dimension. As a previous reviewer pointed out, there wasn't really any dialogue, but I suppose one might interpret narration as a form of dialogue? In any event, good work! Let me know if you're ever interested in converting a short story to a short screenplay.
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