Well,it's certainly different and unusual. It took me by surprise and for that reason I enjoyed it. In dreams text is notoriously difficult to read as words tend to change between glances but that would be difficult to emulate on the page. Much easier to capture that feeling of befuddlement and helplessness which i think you've captured quite well here - I want to know what it says, but it's likely something odd and ultimately inconsequential. Just like dream.
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