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GARY THE GIRAFFE GOES GOLFING

by allanpayne

Parental desperation
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Brilliant concept. A story in a queue, with a purpose. Mixing the narrative up with problems of divorce, calls of nature, other peoples' children, other people and the typically English pursuit of queues. Loved the description of one father's desperation throughout the piece, to satisfy the wishes of one little boy.

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