GARY THE GIRAFFE GOES GOLFING
A cynical and self dooming main character - what else could you ask for :)
I loved the main character, Rob. He was just the sort of cynical "why do these things happen to me" kind of character. His thoughts and dialogue were very amusing and well written.
The concept of the whole script taking place in just one que was original and clever. The opportunity to meet so many different people with weird and quirky characteristics was brilliant.
The structure was well planned - The set ups (mentioning B&Q) and the bottle of water.
Overall. Funny and entertaining.
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