GARY THE GIRAFFE GOES GOLFING
This is a great short script. The plot develops naturally and, although some of the child figures were bordering on cliches, the cynicism of the father figure is well drawn, and carries you along. There is a real flow to it and we have the lovely plant pay off ending. High farce and cool. There's the odd typo, doesn't these don't detract from a good piece of writing.
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