GARY THE GIRAFFE GOES GOLFING
Funny but lacks freshness
I found this scene to be very well written and structured, with many funny parts. However it relied on caricatures (enter the harpy ex-wife...), bad luck and gross-out humour for its laughs. It could be improved with believable characters and events you can truly relate to. As it is now it's a bit like a sit com: easy laughs, quickly forgotten.
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