My entry for the Sci-Fi Short Story Competition is now complete. Wish me luck.
It is available here: http://www.circalit.com/michaelvank/projects/project_1330810783/
Please take the time to write me a review, as this forms part of the competition criteria, thanks.
Constructive criticism is what I’m looking for. I joined this site hoping to improve as a writer. If none of us are prepared to be critical then there would be no improvement – I believe giving good reviews is a skill in itself. So I thank you again, and hope we’ll exchange reviews in the future!