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Feedback Offered
What do you get?
A page long review with editorial suggestions on plot, character and language. I will help you hone and construct a story that perfectly demonstrates your talents a writer.
Why is it important?
With the advent of ebooks I am very pleased to announce that the cache of short stories is growing. A well-written short story is an art form and one that can be used as an advert for your abilities or a tool to build your reputation in literary competitions and publications.
What do you get?
1-2 pages of detailed feedback on your novel. I will provide a detailed analysis of structure, character, style and narrative flow, with suggestions on how to avoid the pitfalls that plague submissions. I will also discuss your work’s initial effect as a reader and suggest what could be changed in order to make instantly accessible to a publisher
Why is it important?
Your book will be judged on these first pages and so it is absolutely crucial that they are as polished and enticing as possible. As a seasoned reader for both literary agencies and publishers I can help you avoid the pitfalls that plague submissions and offer a brief overview of your opening chapters. I will also discuss your work’s initial effect and what could be changed in order to make it devastatingly readable.
What do you get?
2-3 pages of detailed feedback on your novel. I will offer a constructive breakdown of structure, character, plot, style and setting, as well as a general overview of the extract as a whole, discussing both the positive and the negative effects of your plot and characters, drawing attention to anything that interrupts the fluidity and fluency of your writing.
Why is it important?
The key to any book is a structure and narrative. I will offer a broad review of these aspects as well as a general overview of the extract as a whole, discussing both the positive and the negative effects of your plot and characters, drawing attention to anything that interrupts the fluidity and fluency of your writing. This will then help you reassess the direction your book takes and the storylines you develop.
What do you get?
2-5 pages of detailed feedback on your novel. I will provide a detailed overview of characterisation, setting, dialogue, descriptive passages, style, narrative, flow and plot, but also an in-depth discussion of author voice, positioning and marketing appeal. I will also endeavour to list any recurring errors in the book to ensure that the final product is as clean and readable as possible.
Why is it important?
Naturally, the more you ask me to read, the more succinct a review I can offer. This service will tackle not only the effect of your opening chapters and a detailed overview of characterisation and plot, but also an in-depth discussion of structure, narrative, speech, author voice and marketing appeal. I will also endeavour to list any recurring errors in the book to ensure that the final product is as clean and readable as possible.
