Reviews
Loved You Long Time
by anneb
Logline
Love makes you do crazy things. (3 pages)
Type: Short
Genre: Thriller, Psychological,
Synopsis
A man's new ploy to consolidate the love he "shares" with the object of his affection.
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Ron Mathew
- 2011-04-10 15:00:26
- The stab really hurt!!.. The pull from romantic to psycho brother was immense...I liked it! Although I believe there should ahve been a little more subtlety to the stabbing... you do have the desired effect on the reader but it could be increased with a little bit of wordplay.. Good Job!
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emilysian
- 2011-01-10 20:33:20
- just read this...i think it took me all of 10 seconds as i couldn't stop!! Loved this....do a whole version!!! x
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alexis15
- 2011-01-05 00:09:58
- This had me on the edge and there has to be more! This is simply awesome - don't stop you have to continue.
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tumi
- 2010-12-17 14:03:46
- Well written, story well told and unpredictable... curious to go further and learn more about these 2... 2 thumbs up Anne :)
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