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CHEEKY MONKEY

by ashman

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Pretty basic...
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Quite well written, didn't spot any major typos or grammatical errors, scenes were set up well as were character intro's. This felt like the opening of a sitcom, it was pretty basic and mostly quite unentertaining. Nothing really happened to make me feel any kind of emotion apart from 'was that it...?'

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    • ashman

    • 2011-12-15 22:08:12
    • how much can you pack in to 4 pages really? I have to disagree with your comments.

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