HARRY SAMPLER

I do suggest a few minor changes be made however. Pg. 1: Relocate (The boys grab their fishing rods and head towards the dock) down to Pg.2, Under Johnny, Then lets go. The fish are waiting. (Put it here) Pg. 1: Elimanate:(Then lets go fishing.) Pg. 8:Change to: ( with a skeleton in the drivers seat.) Pg.15: Change to (The Chief turns around and heads back to where the three boys are waiting by the boulder.) Great storyline. Well written Dialog. I like it. Best of Luck Ernie Jay