My entry for the Sci-Fi Short Story Competition is now complete. Wish me luck.
It is available here: http://www.circalit.com/michaelvank/projects/project_1330810783/
Please take the time to write me a review, as this forms part of the competition criteria, thanks.
Hi balinovsky, thanks for the message, i got an email notification and it gave me a much needed nudge to submit more. I've not been around for a while because i've been finishing off with university, good news is i did ok so i can give some time to my writing now. As for your critique i am also appreciative of your honesty, i'm pretty green as far as professionalism goes with writing, i just have a head full of ideas and a hope of transferring them succesfully onto the page. I'm afraid the story i've just uploaded was written before 'the picture show' so it is probably guilty of some of the things you were critical of in there but i hope you like it.
I'll be working on some new stuff in the coming weeks and have a little foetus of a novel coming along. Well, its either a foetus or a tumor, either way its going to grow, And either way i'm sure it's doing so will make me miserable haha.