Conversations

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  • Nathan Braund

  • 2012-06-26 15:07:09
  • Hi, hope all’s well. Just to let you know my novel, ‘The Broken Boots Guide to Astlavonia’ has just been published. It’s a black comedy about a debt-ridden divorcee who is sent to Astlavonia, a former soviet state, to write its first ever guidebook but discovers all disputes are settled with a knife. If you’d like to read the first chapter and find out more, please visit www.nathanbraund.com. Please help an unknown writer by telling your friends. Thanks very much. Nathan astlavonia@yahoo.com
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  • michaelvank

  • 2012-03-03 23:43:51
  • My entry for the Sci-Fi Short Story Competition is now complete. Wish me luck. It is available here: http://www.circalit.com/michaelvank/projects/project_1330810783/ Please take the time to write me a review, as this forms part of the competition criteria, thanks.
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  • rusty

  • 2011-04-08 18:47:20
  • hey axeman, cheers for your review of 'circling the drain'. i plan to rewrite it sometime and when i do your review will be very useful. thanks again :)
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  • clare

  • 2011-03-13 18:28:38
  • Axeman Thank you for your very detailed comment. It's great to get another perspective on your own work. I completely take on board your observations, some of which I was sort of aware of but it helps to hear it from a readers position. I feel like I've got a lot of learning to do with regard to my writing and all feedback is most welcome. You're right about the info dumping and the p.o.v. switching, something I will do my best to correct. Thanks again for your time, and don't worry I'll do some ignoring too when the criticism isn't spot on! Regards Clare
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  • axeman

  • 2011-03-11 14:16:34
  • Hi Clare - I'll have a look this weekend (anything particular you'd like read?)