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Love

by bruceboy

Haunting but love triumphs!
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This was deep and emotional. As the reader I felt defeated, as I was placed in the protagonist's shoes. He's supposed to be at the top of his game (he studied medicine) but it all went haywire and all his insecurities and flaws were attacking him in the form of these figures. Quite haunting, but lovely written, the ending was great and i was left wanting more. Stellar effort, I enjoyed it.

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    • bruceboy

    • 2011-11-04 01:37:40
    • Thank you for commenting. It was quite a tough piece to write but hopeful too.

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