Kitaj and the Girl of his Dreams

Loved it! The concept was great - i really got a feel for Paradise Island.  It was kind of predictable but in a good way - i liked being able to guess what might happen.  The characters were well thought out, especially liked Blue Pearl.  I didnt really know if there was much point to the brothers - the story would have worked just as well without them but they added a little mystery to it.  Aslo - if it was me, i'd have had their meeting at the end a little more intense and emotional as he didnt seem to be that bothered about finding her again and even thought she wasnt as good.  That's just a personal view though,

Well done x