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    • E. Van Johnson

    • 2012-08-07 11:44:45
    • HI Robert, You have on your title pae written by THE CIVIL WAR. did yo nmea t or is it a typo? When writing scripts, youcannot make the direcgtor follow your train of thoughtso things like 'He had a red beard' ar unnccessary. Is this for TV or Film. There is a difference. If for film, fine then a city burning is OK. If for TV then someone saying they have just burnt Columbia to the ground is sufficient. A bit s sound track will fill in the blanks and save thousands od dollars in production cost. We need bit more of the Charazcters and less of the dscription t get us hooke. Big Subject good luck. EVJ
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    • Robert E Lee

    • 2012-07-23 03:01:58
    • Thanks, but its not really great, I'll update it sooner or later
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    • Donnetta Williams

    • 2012-07-23 01:54:20
    • Can't wait to read the rest of this. You are off to a great start.
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