You have on your title pae written by THE CIVIL WAR. did yo nmea t or is it a typo?
When writing scripts, youcannot make the direcgtor follow your train of thoughtso things like 'He had a red beard' ar unnccessary.
Is this for TV or Film. There is a difference. If for film, fine then a city burning is OK.
If for TV then someone saying they have just burnt Columbia to the ground is sufficient.
A bit s sound track will fill in the blanks and save thousands od dollars in production cost.
We need bit more of the Charazcters and less of the dscription t get us hooke.
Big Subject good luck. EVJ