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I enjoyed this short, I thought it was sweet, funny in moments and very touching. It is a good length, it does exactly what it needs to do and then ends. I feel like there's maybe room for another draft, just to heighten some of the emotion as there is a very small space on time in which to really care about these characters and you really want an audience to care. Also, just on a practical level, in the first paragraph of action I think it is, he is upset by the death of his wife, but I feel like you need to tell us how we as an audience will know this when watching, rather than just telling us that is why he is upset.