Conversations

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  • Jasmine_Rose

  • 2011-05-12 15:59:00
  • No problem for me to become a fan when I enjoyed reading it! Beautifully written with great characterisation. Keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing more in the future :)
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  • Dawn Chapman

  • 2011-05-11 20:23:39
  • Hey there, what you sending in for the review? I thought they were fantastic and very helpful. :) Congrats...
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  • David Taylor

  • 2011-04-05 14:34:14
  • Thanks so much for taking the time to review 'coming around'. You make some excellent points and your feedback will certainly be taken onboard. To respond to the issue of the principal protagonist, that's Nathan in the full version. His gang actually don't figure that largely in the second half of the story. It's interesting that you thought that though and I'll take a re-read of it with that in mind. The full version is actually uploaded onto the site if you did want to finish it, but don't feel any pressure to do so, you've been a huge help already. Thanks again.
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  • cstreet

  • 2011-03-28 19:59:10
  • Hey!!! Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate you taking the time to go through it and thank you for your comments, I have been snowed under at the moment but I hope to get returning the favours soon :) I have a full draft but the ending is still a bit up in the air. Thanks again!
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  • Dawn Chapman

  • 2011-03-28 17:03:04
  • Hi there, thanks for the comment. I try to be honest, but constructive and hopefully in a way the writers can take something from it. :) Hope to get to know you better and welcome to the site. D