Check out my script "Engaged to Life: Episode 1".
Summary: Daniel is engaged to Carlen so he invites her to move in with him but there will be a a surprise waiting for her at his house. Involves Drama, Comedy, and Romance. Fell free to comment, hope you enjoy it.
Hi Claire
I appreciated your feedback and noted your comment about the point of view in the opening scenes. I have tweaked it a bit. What do you think?
Hi, hope all’s well. Just to let you know my novel, ‘The Broken Boots Guide to Astlavonia’ has just been published. It’s a black comedy about a debt-ridden divorcee who is sent to Astlavonia, a former soviet state, to write its first ever guidebook but discovers all disputes are settled with a knife.
If you’d like to read the first chapter and find out more, please visit www.nathanbraund.com.
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Thanks very much.
Nathan
astlavonia@yahoo.com
Hi Claire,
I'm a bit of a techno-dinosaur - so not sure if my previous comment reached you. Thanks for taking time to give feedback. I too am 'in development'. I'm at work at the mo, but will look at your work later.
All the best,
Samiam
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