The Wee Green Cubicles Of Ireland (first 30 pgs)

I have to admit, Cheryl. Your writing is great. You give just enough to hook us in, but more than enough to satisfy. Paige is a great character, who I liked right from the start. I really digged the animation as well. A very interesting and unique opening insight to her life. Nice call there. I thought maybe something good was going to happen with Cole. But alas, nothing. He turned out to be a right laugh... I also really loved 'dreams are for your twenties, cubicles for your thirties' :) I am really interested to see where this is going. It was a very easy read. Your style is great, I only hope that perhaps you'll post the rest of the script so that I can see where it leads. Dawn