Wow. You’ve clearly got a real gift for writing. I had to collect my thoughts for several moments after reading this – mainly because I wasn’t instantly left wi... Read More
I really enjoyed reading this Emma. A nice punchy opening, and on the whole, a very realistic and believable piece of prose.
It made me want to go round to her house, give her a hand with the cooki... Read More
What a superb story. I loved the concept and was totally gripped from the very beginning. Told in the first person, I was instantly in Janice's world and really fe... Read More
I loved your story Rae - was gripped by your dialogue and vivid descriptions from start to finish.
Great openeing that instantly grads you. You have some realistic lines in here: 'poetry like motio... Read More
Found your tale most amusing Warren. I read around half of it before some friends were due to pop over for dinner - I reached the part where Stevie makes it to the altar with the help of the ambulance... Read More
I love it! Had me laughing inside and out, from start to finish. The not making eye-contact part tickled me the most - living in London myself, I could picture it well.
I would love to read more of... Read More
I liked reading your story, I felt it had good tone and texture and can see where you are coming from. Although, I think it could benefit from some changes to strengthen its impact.
I think the gra... Read More
I Loved this Cat from the very start, until the very end.
In particular, the build up to events was written to the right beat (forgive terrible pun) - and the pace, perfect.
The characters, espe... Read More
Fantastic! I really enjoyed reading this.
The first half was extremely well written and had good clarity. In some ways it was starting to feel quite predictable...which is why the twist works so w... Read More