Reviews written by paulschofield
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A really good read. The relationship between the main character and his invisible friend is superbly written, with comic dialogue and a real feeling of emotion. I liked the idea that the character wou... Read More
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There are some funny scripts entered in the short competition, but for me this is the most amusing I have read. Yes, there are issues with length, you can cut out the 'angle down to feet' part, you ca... Read More
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I really enjoyed reading this piece (despite the downbeat subject matter!) and I think you have a great writing style. One thing that others may say is that you need to break up the work into paragrap... Read More
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A nice piece Shaili, don't you just hate those nights when your brain just won't shut the hell up? I think if you wanted to expand on this further, you could look deeper into the questions, ask yourse... Read More
