Reviews written by lelderkin
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I really enjoyed your characters and the way you brought us back to the 60s in England. I've never been to England (and especially not in the 60s!) but I really felt like I was there. Very good read. ... Read More
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You write beautiful, beautiful prose. I also love your plot - very interested to know what happens next! I thought the character of Mac was exquisite, and Mariam was an interesting addition. The descr... Read More
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I thought this was a very amusing read. I very much liked the characters of Bill, Angie, Jennifer, Michael, Sam, even Shelley. I love love love the concept, it's so original and very well executed. A ... Read More
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This had me laughing, for sure! I really enjoyed the vicar and all of her "This is a House of God," and all that, very funny. I also really liked the parents. And how Stevie woke up and was only able ... Read More
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I really loved the way you overcame your struggles and was able to write about them in this beautiful piece. It's very real and powerful, and I love the way your feelings were difficult to overcome, b... Read More
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You absolutely captured their characters here - the narrator feels very easy to identify with, and watching David through the photos gave me a very clear picture of him in my head. Your descriptions a... Read More
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I liked this a lot. I thought the relationships were very well-developed, and the images where very vibrant in my mind. I think you could have used a bit more dialogue to make it all more clear - the ... Read More
