Reviews written by shayleachensu
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A really nice short piece, with a good twist at the end although slightly guessable from the fact Liam doesn't initially respond to Johanna's words. Good writing with a nice flow, you did a good job ... Read More
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Very enjoyable piece, it felt very poignant and sad too. A great job on conveying this so well. The only problem I have with this piece is niggling grammar issues, it really does ruin the flow of th... Read More
