Reviews written by Samuel Clark
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I liked the intent and the scene itself. But I think the writing is a bit too on the nose if you know what I mean.
It might be better if you went into more detail when describing some of... Read More
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That was very intriguing. You have a knack for realistic dialogue, but I think it might be overly worded, might want to think about cutting back a bit. It really made me want to keep reading to fi... Read More
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I really liked this. Very good description and setting. the dialogue was convincing and there was a lot of tension in the lead up to the last few lines and the reveal. A clever joke. Big technical stu... Read More
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Nice gag and reveal. Speaks to the philosophy of the character (would step over his own grandmother to get where he is) and he quite literally does. There's a question of believability to the lett... Read More
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that's one of the best things I've read in a while. Erm not sure how you could improve that really. Other than paying attention to grammar. I'm a sucker for tragic down endings. And this plays rig... Read More
