Reviews written by robertor

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  I Am A God

  

  "Well-written, but over-blown"

  The writer certainly has some talent, this piece is well-written, but I found it a little pious, pompous and over-earnest. I feel it could have done with a little more humour and wit to lighten the r... Read More
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  GREAT BALL OF FATE

  

  "Witty, original but could do with an edit"

  I quite liked this, it had some very funny, witty lines, two likeable central characters and an original concept, but I thought it could do with extensive editing. There were also quite a few spellin... Read More
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  TBC

  

  "Bizarre, gruesome and gripping"

  I thought this was engrossing, if slightly confusing and maybe a little too macabre and disturbing for some people's tastes. I thought maybe it was a little over-written and there was a bit too much ... Read More