Reviews written by jasongriffith
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You did a nice job here capturing a specific situation-- the stressed out businessperson who is bombarded at every turn with questions, which allowed you to nicely work in the happy little twist at th... Read More
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I think you have a lot of good pieces to a story here. The emotion from the father and the excitement of the chase really come through nicely, but overall the story seems a little disjointed. I thi... Read More
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Great work with this. The story was original, excellently described, and masterfully paced. Nuances were captured wonderfully. Each character developed a huge amount of personality in a very limited n... Read More
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Impressive story. Your style and tone were overpowering from the beginning. The descriptions were incredibly detailed and appropriate, serving to maintain the eeriness of the story's world. The charac... Read More
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Excellent piece of writing-- especially your ability to create excitement and urgency in action sequences. The opening paragraph had me hooked immediately with each small reveal that further exposed t... Read More
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Your biggest success here was coming up with an interesting story that worked quite nicely as a silent. It was easy to follow even without any of the characters saying anything. However it feels a bit... Read More
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I thought the idea of having blind dates sit and wait unknowingly in each other's presence was original and great. It's an interesting look into the world of arranged/online dating, and it shows how m... Read More
