Reviews written by Andrew Mc
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It's a fun little tale, the boys are mischievous enough and the other characters all seem very happy with life. The action and description are clear, concise and flows beautifully. With regar... Read More
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I liked this piece, the pages flowed and I was engaged throughout.
On first look, rather than have John explain why things are so bad, losing Anna, the business etc, could you show us wi... Read More
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There were two points where I laughed out loud - the main one being the reflection asking why he's just 'knocked one out'. Very funny.
I don't think the concept is that d... Read More
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I liked this piece, the imagery was vivid and I related to the characters and felt their impending doom. Now call me old-fashioned/disneyfied/a stupid dickhead but it was too linear for me the on... Read More
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I liked it, my favourite bit was when Tony was listing the songs and Simon says 'Led Zeppelin' and Tony replies 'Who?', classic stuff.
Few formatting things:
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The piece was neatly written and I followed it through all the way.
The location description was solid and I had a good image of the party.
The concept is a good un' but mor... Read More
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This was an interesting piece and the concept has had UK media attention for decades. I've personally seen both WWII enthusiasts and poor students cop it for their decision to dress as a Nazi... Read More
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I enjoyed this, the characters seem real and fun.
It wears the influence of 'Hitchhikers' on its sleeve which is fine and some of the bits are humorous but the gags could be shar... Read More
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From the synopsis, I was hooked into the story however when it came to reading it, the pace seemed to slow after page 2. When she finds out the news, there is a long time between her finding out ... Read More
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I really liked this and I'm often referred to as dead inside.
The characters were spot on, the relationship was on the money and in no way creepy (which I have seen in an old man, yo... Read More
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I really liked this and I was hooked the way through, I actually thought it was going to go into a 'Falling Down' scenario where the two males come to loggerheads or that a massive twist ... Read More
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I liked this concept. It flies along at a good pace and I was interested the whole way but as a scientific-minded person, I put myself in her shoes. If I was a scientist that is obviously talented, w... Read More
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Is this a spoof comedy??? Not that clear from the outset, if so then I suppose all the storylines are allowed to be too close to other stories. Having read the project before the synopsis, I made som... Read More
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I liked this piece. I smiled when reading it and enjoyed the snappy, intelligent tone. The banter between the two is great, the fact that Winston speaks like a grumpy, middle-class gentleman only add... Read More
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Okay so I hope you don't mind me breaking it up into 30 page chunks. A very, very dark piece, Ridley Scott dark. I really like the way you set the scene and have no lab assistants walk in durin... Read More
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I need to give this another read as I'm still in shock. It reminds me so much of Bad Taste - Like Jackson with his early work, downsize the locations/action a little, get a camera and some buddies ... Read More
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Hi Tony - Can't say too much as I can only read the first page! That's why I've given a low score for concept because I can't grasp it from one page :D Just a few housekeeping tips - I'd break up t... Read More
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This is a touching tale however it reads like a short story/monologue rather than a screenplay. The action and description have depth - formatting-wise I would break up the action into chunks of th... Read More
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SPOILER ALERT in this review, you've been warned! I really liked this Lee (may I call you Lee?), it made me chortle out loud and I am technically dead inside, kudos! I liked the characters, havi... Read More
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A predictable tale that flowed well but the pay-off needed to be better. There's no need for the exposition after we see the flashback i.e. explaining to Dave that he makes up symptoms after we jus... Read More
