Reviews written by GMan
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Like the language...not too safe. As I read wasn't sure which way any argument was going to go. It pointed out some things I would reference but I might have a different take so I must admit ... Read More
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Well. That was strange. I will try to be constructive...bouncers...I did not think they existed anymore...and unless you give them some 'bouncing' to do I would point out t... Read More
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I loved the last line....should have seen it coming but didn't, so well done. The angel and devil thing played well and I was impressed how you brought that in. I don't usually like the d... Read More
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I liked the play on words with the Man of Gold. If this is the continuing basis for Colin resolving problems by interpreting surreal dreams then this episode seemed to make that clear that Colin could... Read More
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Very very believable. I'm not sure we should be revealing to some the goings on around us but everyone must know by now. Puts a slant on Offices that Mr Gervais avoided. Your use of many montages show... Read More
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I liked the title as it suggested a concept not alien. Liked what you did with the 100 word limit. Got just a hint of tension....intended or just me? The ending was interesting because of twist which ... Read More
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...will usually attract my intention so "..axis of Evil" is gonna work with me. Liked the concept and the character but something lacking in the character... I would move her from being a receptionist... Read More
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I love the fact that this is the first entry I have read that seemed to be what I imagined the Story-world idea to be. Sorry I am not going to try and be clever and analyse whether it is morally corre... Read More
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What an excellent use of one of the greatest games ever devised. This could be extended on many levels. Loved the use of 'God' like character sitting and controlling lives. However if Death loses what... Read More
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I definitely like the concept as 'Green' is definitely not just black or white. I like that you obviously know a bit about the subject matter and technical aspects are outlined well. I'm not sure if y... Read More
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I like the childishness (but I realise you get that) in the characters but maybe change some of the dialogue. I like the phonecall scene but I would suggest a slight amend - i.e.: "uuurgh, it's a... Read More
