Reviews written by adamspencer21
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The bobbles conversation at the start was very funny it is the type of thing a guy would say to his girlfriend – also secretly hoping she would be turned on and say “ok rip the dress from me and l... Read More
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I like how the protagonist, eve, is constantly in search for love and fairytale endings. I may be wrong but I feel Eve is vey naïve and has maybe flown from the nest too early to University and she h... Read More
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It was a good idea the story. Light-hearted and fun. I don't like to change people's scripts that much but i think it'll be funnier if Lisa was starring straight ahead at the telly in the living room,... Read More
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The ending of the short piece came as a complete surprise, a good surprise I may add. It brought a smile to my face, I would love to read more, I really do hope you are writing more! Also I could tast... Read More
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I really enjoyed your writing style it was intelligent and witty especially the part about the phrases. Your writing seemed to lack realism and authenticity when the characters were conversing with ea... Read More
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Funny and humorous. I can imagine the character Gordan vividly. The character is well written and you get a good sense of what he will be like throughout the rest of the play. There is a continuity er... Read More
