Reviews written by jammindave
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Good piece, tight story and very powerful imagery about a serious topic. The emotions come through loud and clear, particularly the Mom's love and affection and the Dad's struggle but also the love. I... Read More
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I agree with what another reviewer mentioned, the characters are interesting and develop a lot of personality in just a short time. The fisherman was a little jarring, but I think the story could work... Read More
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Pretty well written and interesting dialogue. The twist when the axe is wielded actually caught me by surprise in a good way, that is well written and I could imagine the scene quite easily as I read ... Read More
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Interesting. I like the writing of the dialogue in the doctors office, and the way in which the main character worries about stuff like getting into Heaven using semantics. Seems unreasonable and disj... Read More
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I think this is a good start, the emotion is there and it's pretty raw and powerful. I like the imagery with the iPod and the kids' room, and the description of the scene and the driver screaming. I t... Read More
