I really like this and the lovely little surprise at the end. Tender and assured writing. Perhaps a tiniest bit wordy but otherwise lovely. I shall remember this piece and it really is properly v... Read More
Not sure where the story was headed but the mood set up quite well. A few typos including "you're" instead of "your" and keep all sentences active and keep them pre... Read More
A great idea and has an oddly old-fashioned style, which somehow fits the story. I rather like this tale and the mood stayed with me for quite a while after reading it.
I wonder if... Read More
I absolutely adore this and the lovely payoff at the end. The vernacular is spot on and a charming way to see the world. Reminds me of some Irish short stories written by one of my oldest friends... Read More
This reads like a serious chicken manual and is very funny indeed. The use of English has a slightly foreign feel, which, for me, works a treat and sets the writing in a lovely mood. Would love t... Read More
An unexpected twist at the end - didn't see it coming. But it seems a shame that the poor old girl has been deprived of a fun companion so soon afetr being widowed. I was left thinking how ni... Read More
Loved this and it engaged me from the very beginning. Good visual sense and a neat little twist, which I didn't quite see coming. Lovely piece of work and would love to see it on the screen!<... Read More