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Four

by craigcf

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A Foursome arranged between two disillusioned couples spirals out of control, leading to lies, deceit, betrayal and eventually murder.

Type: Teleplay

Genre: Drama,

Synopsis

What started out as a birthday treat suddenly takes an unexpected turn for the worse, as the couples battle with their feelings.

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    • craigcf

    • 2011-08-20 17:12:35
    • Thanks Marvin, glad you enjoyed it, and that you didn't see the ending coming!
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    • Marvin K. Perkins

    • 2011-08-20 15:47:21
    • Craig, I must say I enjoyed your teleplay very much. It kept my interest from beginning to end and the shocking ending was really unexpected. Good plot twist! I wish you luck with it. Marvin
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    • mystergeneral

    • 2010-09-27 07:13:39
    • Well written, and quite interesting, but saw the twist coming from the start. good luck though :)
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    • lauraleighcarr

    • 2010-09-23 11:46:52
    • Awesome, great idea I loved it. I wish you every success
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    • craigcf

    • 2010-06-17 08:17:21
    • Hi Nadia/Brainchild, Thanks for the reads and the comments, greatly appreciated. Brainchild- I've removed your post for one simple reason- you give away the twist completely in your review! If you could post your comments again without mentioning 'you-know-what' I'd be hugely grateful! I'm sorry you thought it was too drawn out, and never really got going though, and no, it's not true about ant powder. Craig

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