Spiritual Connections Episode One
by craigcf
Logline
Introduce yourselves to Mary, the alcoholic medium who lets the spirits do the talking. 'Pilot' episode.
Type: Teleplay
Genre: Comedy, Paranormal, Spiritual,
Synopsis
A six-part comedy series following the exploits of Mary, the straight talking spiritualist medium. Loosely based on the short 'Heavenly Intentions' Contains language and scenes that could be considered offensive. *FULL EPISODE*
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Tom
- 2011-08-14 09:58:21
- I really enjoyed this. It is believable; the characters have little nuances that make them real and fun to be with. I’m gonna save the review until I’ve read the whole series. If you want some constructive criticism, which I assume you do, get rid of things like “breathing – profoundly” and “eyes dart – tempestuously” other than that I thought it was wonderful, refreshing and very funny. I also write in the paranormal field because I believe there’s a market for it. My first two screen plays are on here if you’d like to do a critique. Sometimes we get so close to our work we can’t see the faults and I’d appreciate some feedback. I will review and feedback when I read the rest.
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craigcf
- 2010-07-07 01:37:09
- Hi Hollzzz, Thanks for taking the time to read this and leave your feedback. "If Mary is the real thing why is she so horrible? Why is she so foul mouthed. Why does she have such a attitude with everyone? Is it because of the drink?" - She is so horrible because this is a comedy, and a boring, nice central character would be rubbish (too many 'My Family' and 'The Upperhands' if you ask me). I, personally, find the exploits of a complete arse-candle of a person more amusing that someone 'normal'! She has an attitude because thats where the humour arises, She is foul mouthed because etc etc. I did actually do a 'straight' version of this called 'Heavenly Intentions, and although I'm proud of that, I think even more of this. As I said, thanks for reading. I'm sorry it wasn't your cup of tea! Craig
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craigcf
- 2010-06-17 08:18:57
- Hi Brainchild, Thanks for the read. Glad you found it so funny! I can't see the point of being PC, when it comes to comedy TBH! Nice one! Craig
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craigcf
- 2010-05-16 08:16:49
- Hi Plainview, Glad you enjoyed reading it! All six episodes of series one are on here somewhere buddy! Thanks again and all the best, Craig
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