This was lively!
Lively and also had many punctuation and quite a few spelling errors in it. Yes, yes, you're going to say - that doesn't matter. It's the story that matters. Yes, the story matters most of all but I'm afraid the presentation does too.
Please sort it out! This might make quite a good short film. Although rather a lot of advertising for Tesco :)
2 junkies are desperate for a fix but find themselves treading on eggshells as they try to organize a meet with their bad-tempered drug dealer. *Expli... more
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