The Flames of Collawullah

This is an interesting glimpse into what looks like a larger piece but it is a little confusing with the advertising input from Subway into a writing competition.  There is no dialogue so I cannot comment on that.  The setting sounds very interesting and I would definitely read more of it.  Somehow the Subway reference just throws it off for me, as if it had to be in there because the Subway company sponsored the  work so it had to be in there whether it fit or not.  Not sure.