Need feedback on my screenplay the North and the South, I am new to screenwriting, only know a few terms. I want useful feedback, where could I improve? What can I do to change this mistake? What parts need changing? Where could I cut down? What can I do to make it better?
My entry for the Sci-Fi Short Story Competition is now complete. Wish me luck.
It is available here: http://www.circalit.com/michaelvank/projects/project_1330810783/
Please take the time to write me a review, as this forms part of the competition criteria, thanks.
hi, not been arounf for a while. This is a very late thank you for your thoughts on Apartment 3c, you'll be pleased to know I'm in the process of transfering it to celtx for re-writes and hopefully an ending soon :) hope you are well