Need feedback on my screenplay the North and the South, I am new to screenwriting, only know a few terms. I want useful feedback, where could I improve? What can I do to change this mistake? What parts need changing? Where could I cut down? What can I do to make it better?
My entry for the Sci-Fi Short Story Competition is now complete. Wish me luck.
It is available here: http://www.circalit.com/michaelvank/projects/project_1330810783/
Please take the time to write me a review, as this forms part of the competition criteria, thanks.
hi, not been arounf for a while. This is a very late thank you for your thoughts on Apartment 3c, you'll be pleased to know I'm in the process of transfering it to celtx for re-writes and hopefully an ending soon :) hope you are well
Hey thanks for the fanship! Hope you like it, its fallen very much by the wayside and the format is still word so its all out of margin etc but I'd be interested to hear your thoughts :)
Robert E Lee