Was it going to be losses all the way?

Dear Arti, I read your story and it is good.  The raw emotion comes through very well.  In fact it may be a bit too raw for fictional purposes.  Some emotional distance would heighten the effect. 

The English, though excellent, is a bit stilted and awkward.  Also I would change the title, again this may be a translation issue, but having a question mark in the title undermines your message and asking a rhetorical question at that.

This concept has been done before and so, you need unique elements that set your story apart - use your creativity to achieve this. 

Best,

Ann