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Nuclear Family

by eboucher

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Interesting idea. The descriptions, particulary in the park were very vivid. I especially liked the dialogue which had good comic timing. I like the way the relationship of John and Mark was built up. I know I'm in the minority, I didn't get the ending. John's wife wipes Mark's nose. Does that mean she is part of this game the two men are playing? Keep writing?

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