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Diffusion

by ecg300

Bit depressing really
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Although I found this rather depressing I didn't actually guess what she was going to do. It was very well written, although the use of 'cave' in the description of her waking seemed out of place to me and sent me off into another scenario completely. The scenes of cutting were a little disturbing but this fitted rather well with how she was feeling. well done.

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