That is a shame Anthony, they'll just have to learn how to do the boulder going up the hill and the children. I've just put up my short "Last Christmas", would appreciate if you could take a look whenever you get a chance. Cheers, Norina.xxx
Thanks very much for the read! As for the machinima, it was deemed unfilmable because they can't yet do the boulder going up the hill - or the children - and both are of course intrinsic to the story.
I enjoyed reading this, it didn't feel like 9 pages. I'll agree with the others that it is very heavy handed on dialogue but then you already know that. It is obvious also that it is intended for something like machinima, so good job that it shows. Nice and fluid though, think I'll read it again. :)