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Judgement Day

by farah

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Hi Farah, I wasn't sure that two pages of writing would see a satisfactory story with a great conclusion. I was wrong. This was really good and the ending quite a surprise . I also liked the salutory warnign about who you allow to access your property - both physical and intellectul. Good stuff.

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